This post is a response to Write on Edge’s Write at the Merge # 6 (stained glass, and the lyrics to Fun’s “Some nights”), and Trifecta’s word (Path – 3a : course, route b : a way of life, conduct, or thought).
If you’re looking for some great short stories, I highly recommend checking them out by following the links below and reading a few of the other submissions.
Concrit always welcome, I hope you enjoy!
“Our path should take us through the high pass. That’s what all the records indicate.” Ruby alternated scowling down at the grubby map in her hands and the weathered building before them.
“I’m telling you, this is it. This is where it lead.”
“The map is supposed to take us to a Haven.” Ruby’s voice cracked and Jim moved to put a hand on her shoulder, only to have it slapped away. “You must have read it wrong.”
“Let’s just go and check it out.”
“Fine.” she strode across the boulder-strewn yard and through the arched doorway, Jim trailing behind her. Halfway down the aisle, she snapped, “See, nothing but a church from the before-time.”
Jim walked past her, entranced at the sight of the stained glass mosaic rising up from the shadowy hall, lighting the motes of dust in fiery hues. “It’s fully intact! Can you believe it?”
“What are we supposed to do now, Jim?” Ruby barely glanced at the glass.
“How could it’ve survived for so long, unbroken? I mean, Ruby, have you ever seen anything like it?” Jim felt a painful squeeze at his heart, understanding now what his mother meant about the exquisit pain of seeing something truly beautiful with your own two eyes. “It’s just so much better than that picture in Mrs Em’s book, y’know?”
Ruby smacked Jim in the head. “You know what’s better than a bunch of glass? Surviving. How about you come back out of the clouds and focus in that, huh?”
“But Ruby -”
“We’ll find the right path in the morning. Do something useful for a change and break up some of those chairs for firewood.”
Jim sighed as his sister stormed out into the dying light of day.
“… how could stained glass still be whole without protection?”
“How, indeed?” The man at the pulpit had a cruel gleam in his eye.
The church doors crashed closed.
“Ruby?” Jim whispered, backing away from the red-lit man.







joetwo
/ February 7, 2013Very good! Love the ending.
lexy3587
/ February 8, 2013thanks
atrm61
/ February 7, 2013I almost jumped out of my skin at that ending,eeks!Great job:-)
lexy3587
/ February 8, 2013hah, yeah, it was a bit of a change of pace
atrm61
/ February 8, 2013Elizabeth Rodriguez (@LibbyBlog)
/ February 7, 2013Oh No!
Sounds like th beginning of a scary movie!
lexy3587
/ February 8, 2013I’ve been watching too much Supernatural. No, Dean, don’t split up! The house will lock Sam in a room! GAH!
kymminbarcelona
/ February 7, 2013Uh-oh!
Bee (@LivingOffScript)
/ February 7, 2013Eek!
Angela
/ February 7, 2013Oh no! I was so excited and hopeful for them that the church would be a haven, and this doesn’t seem to be a positive step for them.
~Angela
lexy3587
/ February 8, 2013I’m sure they’d have preferred it to be a haven. muah ha ha
Draug419
/ February 7, 2013Creeper alert! haha (: Great piece!
lexy3587
/ February 8, 2013thanks
jannatwrites
/ February 8, 2013Yikes! This doesn’t look good for them…
lexy3587
/ February 8, 2013not at all. Never good when doors slam shut!
Tori Nelson
/ February 8, 2013Made me jump! You must be writing it right
lexy3587
/ February 8, 2013excellent
I mean… i’m so sorry I frightened you…
shelton keys dunning
/ February 9, 2013Love this scene and where this story is going. Well done!
lexy3587
/ February 15, 2013thanks
Cameron
/ February 11, 2013I love that they are headed for Haven, such a close word to heaven and so not where they’ve arrived. The church doors slamming shut is a wonderfully ominous moment!
lexy3587
/ February 15, 2013Thanks – I hadn’t even thought of the heaven connection, but yes, they haven’t arrived at either, that’s for sure
2browndawgs
/ February 14, 2013Excellent! Loved the unexpected ending.
lexy3587
/ February 15, 2013thanks!
Jodi
/ February 18, 2013Oh No!! This sounds like a scary one to me.